Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Monday's Minutes


*Click the photo to go to Tessa's post* =)

*BTW, I have some stinkin' Internet problem so i am not going to be posting a ton. =P Perhaps you'll be happy. ;) I am currently at a restraunt doing this and checking my email *grins* Now onto the point of this post =)*

I am doing 1-3 paragraphs starting with the sentance: When she called my name, I knew my life would never be the same again.

   When she called my name, I knew my life would never be the same again. Her voice had that control over me, pulling me closer and closer. With each syllable, her words tightened around me, pulling me closer to my life that was about to change forever. But still I kept moving, one foot in front of the other.
   "Baliey," she whispered my name, I lurched forward towards her, bowing instantly. What was I doing?
   She repeated my name several times, other words--commands--coming after them. What was she telling me to do? All I could hear was her voice saying my name. Her voice capturing my mind in such a way, I heard nothing...

I really enjoyed doing that one! =D Thanks Tessa! =D

abrielle lindsay

3 comments:

  1. I awarded you over at my blog!
    http://livingmylifedifferent.blogspot.com/2014/02/awards.html

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  2. I've never read anything like that before *applause*. Good job TW!

    HP

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